I had a chocolate bunny
So sweet and pure and fine
And I licked him once or twice
Just to make him mine
So lovely was this bunny
So bright in chocolate hue
I just nibbled at the edge
And took a bite or two
I really didn't mean it
But he smelled so yum
I knew he would forgive me
When I munched on his tum
He lost his bunny outline
Became a rounded blob
So I mushed him in my hand
I guess I'm just a slob
I licked his bunny fingers
Now chocolate dregs I fear
And looked into his button eyes
No more than just a smear
I rounded off his body
And finished him with glee
That little tail will not escape
For it belongs in me
I slowly licked the leavings
And gave a tiny sigh
That bunny was so wonderful
Is there one more I can buy?
Author notes
This is a revision of Turtle Power just for this contest. 
Written April 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Only for previous entrants of Give me a C.B. to collect winnings! by intanglio2ring.
300 points, ended April 17, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ms Kethry, I'm not sure whether this is a love or a horror story. You know there is something about you, I'm sure you could write about opening a can of peaches and make it sound romantic and sexy. I may jjust be me, thank you.
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This is so cute, I laughed through the entire thing! How darling it is! Poor little bunny. Well, I guess none will be safe in your hands.
Hugs, Patricia 
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Chocolishious
You certainly mastered the true art of eating dangerously. And yes, after we're finished we hide the wrapper and look for more. Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the contest.
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