C olors swirl upon the
h orizon, filled with
o mniscient dreams, bringing
c larity to moments if we will only
o bserve the dance that
l ingers
a cross the night with a quiet, gentle
t ouch, trailing
e mbers in its wake...
P ursue the depths
o f your Heart & Soul with
e qual intensity ~
t ruth will
r eveal such incredible Beauty to
y our shining eyes...
~ April 14, 2006
2:00 a.m.
Author notes
Picture credit: "Eternal Quest" by Rassouli
www.rassouli.com
Background courtesy of Mad Moon
I decided to do one for this Poet based on
the fact that we're both from Oklahoma City, they
left a nice comment on bluffininlv's acrostic for me...
& 'sides that...with a name like "Chocolate Poetry",
how could I possibly resist???
www.allpoetry.com/poets/Chocolate%20Poetry
Written April 14th, 2006
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Thank you, Chocolate Poetry...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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awww I feel so loved! lol. And poem is written beautifuly. I wish I could pick out a part that I like more than another but it's all written so well! Now, I'll have to dedicate a poem to you, Night Hope.
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Yeahhh, numbers make it kinda difficult...If you do change your name, just don't change it to a name with "x" & "z", 'k???
I'd thought about you sending me your full name through email & I'll do one for ya, John...Of course I like ya enough to...silly Poet...
Wanda
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I think I'm going to have to change my ap name, for doing an acrostic of '94' might not be the easiest task! Of course, that's assuming I'll be liked enough by anyone to write an acrostic about me! Great job, miss hope! I hope chocolate appreciates the attention! be well! John (hmmm, what could be my AP name?)
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Ooooohhh...me, too...
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Indeed, Madame Librarian...indeed...
Wander Lea
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Thank you for hosting, Jess...I'm glad you enjoyed it...I put a link on their author's page...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Thank you for reading, Closet Poet...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Gracias, mi hijo...I'm well, Angelus...Hope you are, too...
Wanda
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ahhh Madre..wonderful write. I am amazed everytime when I read something of yours...hope your doing well..Peace, Angelus
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C olors swirl upon the
h orizon, filled with
o mniscient dreams, bringing
c larity to moments if we will only
o bserve the dance that
l ingers
a cross the night with a quiet, gentle
t ouch, trailing
e mbers in its wake...
i want chocolate ice cream lol - happy happy joy joy
Spill ink and drink - wink - twist me into the shapely ape of love's nape.
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For shore ... how can you resist a name like chocolate poetry
Another beautiful and thoughtful acrostic tribute Wander
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beautiful... i love this.. definityly a contender for best written,,.
well done this is beautiful..
dont forget to send them a link
thanks for lighting a smile
jess -
hehe not what i thoguht, but it is a beautiful write... i can't pick fave parts in your poetry, its all brilliant!
luvvin it, im gunna go eat something now... haha guess what?
nope, it was apples
im gunna check out this chocolate person,
nice write good luck for the contest!
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