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Acrostic for Chocolate Poetry

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C  olors swirl upon the
h  orizon, filled with
o  mniscient dreams, bringing
c  larity to moments if we will only
o  bserve the dance that
l  ingers
a  cross the night with a quiet, gentle
t  ouch, trailing
e  mbers in its wake...

P  ursue the depths
o  f your Heart & Soul with
e  qual intensity ~
t  ruth will
r  eveal such incredible Beauty to
y  our shining eyes...




        ~ April 14, 2006
            2:00 a.m.









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Picture credit: "Eternal Quest"  by Rassouli

www.rassouli.com


Background courtesy of Mad Moon


I decided to do one for this Poet based on
the fact that we're both from Oklahoma City, they
left a nice comment on bluffininlv's acrostic for me...
& 'sides that...with a name like "Chocolate Poetry",
how could I possibly resist???  


www.allpoetry.com/poets/Chocolate%20Poetry




Written April 14th, 2006

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  • Night Hope gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you, Chocolate Poetry...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
  • Chocolate Poetry
    April 22, 2006
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    awww I feel so loved! lol. And poem is written beautifuly. I wish I could pick out a part that I like more than another but it's all written so well! Now, I'll have to dedicate a poem to you, Night Hope.

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Yeahhh, numbers make it kinda difficult...If you do change your name, just don't change it to a name with "x" & "z", 'k??? I'd thought about you sending me your full name through email & I'll do one for ya, John...Of course I like ya enough to...silly Poet... Wanda
  • johnh94
    April 14, 2006
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    I think I'm going to have to change my ap name, for doing an acrostic of '94' might not be the easiest task! Of course, that's assuming I'll be liked enough by anyone to write an acrostic about me! Great job, miss hope! I hope chocolate appreciates the attention! be well! John (hmmm, what could be my AP name?)

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Ooooohhh...me, too...

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Indeed, Madame Librarian...indeed... Wander Lea

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Thank you for hosting, Jess...I'm glad you enjoyed it...I put a link on their author's page...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Thank you for reading, Closet Poet...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Gracias, mi hijo...I'm well, Angelus...Hope you are, too... Wanda

  • Angelus Darktree
    April 14, 2006
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    ahhh Madre..wonderful write. I am amazed everytime when I read something of yours...hope your doing well..Peace, Angelus
  • ian sawicki
    April 14, 2006
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    C olors swirl upon the
    h orizon, filled with
    o mniscient dreams, bringing
    c larity to moments if we will only
    o bserve the dance that
    l ingers
    a cross the night with a quiet, gentle
    t ouch, trailing
    e mbers in its wake...


    i want chocolate ice cream lol - happy happy joy joy

    Spill ink and drink - wink - twist me into the shapely ape of love's nape.

  • transcendental baby gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    For shore ... how can you resist a name like chocolate poetry Another beautiful and thoughtful acrostic tribute Wander

  • -ButterflyCuts-
    April 14, 2006
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    beautiful... i love this.. definityly a contender for best written,,.
    well done this is beautiful..
    dont forget to send them a link
    thanks for lighting a smile
    jess

  • Closet Poet
    April 14, 2006
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    hehe not what i thoguht, but it is a beautiful write... i can't pick fave parts in your poetry, its all brilliant! luvvin it, im gunna go eat something now... haha guess what?
    nope, it was apples
    im gunna check out this chocolate person,
    nice write good luck for the contest!
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