Somber
Her countenance is
As she outlines her eyes with black
Silently
She strides
As she creeps along the floor
Mysterious
Her presence emanates
As she reveals what you hide
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Written April 14th, 2006
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this is deep bro!
I am so amazed by your simple and obvious insight.
You see what others don't, even though they should, because it seems to be in plain sight!
I would give anything to be able to see through your eyes for even for just a day.
I know we've had our differences, but I hope you believe that I really respect what you're trying to do.
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elloquent
I love your poem! I enjoy this style of writing very much....
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