Thoughts of his death
I just had a hunch
That there must be someway
To take out Cap'n Crunch
A hammer
A knife
I think not
I think Lucky
Would kill him on the spot
Lucky he is indeed
His lucky charms he will feed
To his old friend Cap'n Crunch
He would kill him
Over brunch
Needles
Poison
Possibly
Out like a light
One
Two
Three
Author notes
This is quite different for me to write...i did have fun doing it though lol...well enjoy
option 17- humor
Written April 15th, 2006
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Very smile-erific
Love the added effects you gave this with flow and wording. Nicely penned indeed.
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Hehe, this is very cute and original, thankd for entering :]
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lol! very creative poem! great write, really funny
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congrats well done
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This is uncanny because, 2 years ago called Frosted Flakes on the Loose, same premise, the idea sounds alot alike. I'm not saying that you stole this but I would like to know your source. Jimmy Buffet also has a song called Cereal Killer just heard it. About well the same toppic you wrote about. This is different then mine and I like it, You can check out the one I entered as well, if you are fond of this topic
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this poem is sooooooooooooooooo funny
i loved it its one of the best ones that i have read so far
it's so original and AWESOME
i love all your poems your an awesome poet
thanks a lot for entering my contest
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hehe.... thank you for your write... I love the play on words on the title and within the piece.
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hahahhaha! I thought this was hilarious!
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Fight Night.
Cap'n Crunch 3:16. -
This is a very funny contest. Your poem is right up there with FUN-E!
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Too funy. Good luck in this contest.
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haha ... so funny! I love the urgency with which you want to hammer that pudgy little milkfaring sea bisquit.
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