Just another love song?
Is that all you have to
give to me!I like the
song's but does it
allways have to be one?
I love you but i don't
want just another love
song!If this is all
you have for me im mot
shur i want it!But thank's
anyway.
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Written April 15th, 2006
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I think the way you broke up the poem ruined the flow. I also suggest that when you write a poem, you should use spellcheck.
I didn't think this was a great poem... it was just 'ok'. I think you are capable of writing something much better than this. I'm sure you have lots of potential...
So, keep writing and eventually you'll make an excellent piece.
By the way, I'm not saying any of your other poems aren't excellent. I haven't read them, so I wouldn't know.
With Kindness,
Dawn
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