With pieces of my heart
to others I impart
the knowledge of a scheme
of an everlasting dream
where everyone will fly
on the clouds in the sky
over the world we will soar
with it's beauty to adore
Author notes
Short and sweet, I like having to use a list of rhyming words at times, such that then I can more easily come up with lines to pair together with the words
Written April 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Bouts Rime by mamad.
400 points, ended April 25, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like this... its short and to the point... and sometimes simple just gets the job done... great write...
-tabbykat -
i like this... its short and to the point... and sometimes simple just gets the job done... great write...
-tabbykat -
nice poem
I liked the used of the simple quatrain and the couplet rhyme scheme. The fact that you used only eight words when others used sixteen did not help you. Nice content also.
Edited on Apr 25, 11:49 because ''.
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