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My love so dear...

My heart so dear.
Is not a toy.
Hold it near.
My sweet boy.

Protect it well.
From everything.
It’s not for sale.
Even to be mean.

Hold it tight.
And don’t let go.
During night.
When times are low.

It just began.
It’s a start.
Time for fun.
Give YOUR heart.

Held real close.
To my chest.
Loved the most.
I’ll do my best.

I give my word.
I want yours too.
Until it’s heard.
I won’t know it’s true.

So promise me.
Death do us part.
It’s meant to be.
We’ll share our heart.

Author notes

I wrote this in my boyfriends Easter Card. Cheesy, yes I know.
Written April 15th, 2006

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  • Jai Lysia
    November 29, 2006

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    I agree with eyes, this isn't cheesy. I like it very much. It's sweet and innocent, just like love poems should be.


  • Natural Beauty
    October 8, 2006
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    Good.

    This is a very nice piece. Very detailed. I enjoyed it tremendously. I bet your boyfriend enjoyed it. I would have. I think it was a nice idea. I hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep up the good writes. And have a wonderful day and God bless you in all you do.

  • The Eyes of a Angel
    April 21, 2006
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    this is not cheesy at all. ishould read more of your poetry i really like them. nice job