If you are my myspace friend.
Here is something I must mend.
For I have a problem you must see.
Something that I just can't let be.
You see, I just have way too much.
A touchy subject that I must touch.
More friends than I can even count.
Two hundred is almost the amount.
Some that I talk to every single day.
Some, acquaintances you could say.
Those who I don’t know their name.
Then those I talk to just the same.
You guys are taking up too much space.
You can’t even put my name to my face.
So why do I keep you, I must know.
Sorry to tell you, you gotta go!
Author notes
Editing my myspace friends. Obviously. And I need some extra practice in writing. So that's what this is.
Written April 19th, 2006
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I like this, it's the nicest get lost I've ever heard. I'm looking forward to your next poem. Good job!
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Good.
This is a very nice piece. It is kind of funny. I enjoyed it tremendously. I hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep up the good writes. And have a wonderful day and God bless you in all you do. -
Very nice piece.
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Hi, take a look at your 1st line perhaps you might like to correct it, Di
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rhyming couplets, I can't remember the last time I saw you write in couplets. Usually you write in free verse or ABAB style. You also choose the weirdest topics to write about, geez. Kids these days...
God Bless
D. Chisholm
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