Hit me with another hard blow
I dare you to turn me insane
Do you think I just need more
Or do you think I don't feel the pain
Have I done something to upset you
What did I do to anger you so
But guess what... I don't care anymore
You made a choice, and boy, does it show
You seem happy, but when I look at you
I see a spoilt boy that can't feel
Or pretends not to, either way, I hate you
And as I say, I always will
There is now hatred, frustration and anger
There was once happiness, along time ago
You may feel as if we are good friends
But I hate you, and trust me, it won't come and go
Why am I writing this when I really shouldn't be
Why am I wasting my time on a dumb shit like you
Oh I just realised exactly what it is
Its called 'closure', you should try it too
Author notes
Don't worry, I know this is a shitty piece but I needed to get it out of my system so I can move onto better pieces! This is just about my hate for a guy. It could be directed at two people, but I don't really know who. Anyways, I know there will be critism and I don't care cos I know how bad this piece is okay.
Written April 20th, 2006
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It's good you have high standards for your writing. Very good. --Ellis -
Brilliant expression you go girl get it all out for then you can truely let go and move on brilliant work keep writing keep smiling
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ahh nice one. I like this...theres nothing quite like venting your anger!! Great work! Im proud of you!
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i love these lines Em:
You seem happy, but when I look at you
I see a spoilt boy that can't feel
They are so good and so true!
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wow great write i so can relate to this i think u did very well
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I dont think this is shitty. I think its really powerful and really strong. I really liked how you ended it and how you wrote it.Well done and good luck in life...x
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