There will never be any light
Only darkness, only ever darkness
But I don't mind this pitch black world
It is peaceful, apart from the screams
Oh yes, I hear screams at night
They used to be my own, but not anymore
I learned to live with it, they haven't
They cannot grasp this forsaken Hell
This is not the fire-burning Hell
This is Hell diguised as life
People think they lead such great lives
They're wrong, eventually something will happen
Sooner or later everyone will see
They will open their eyes and see death
No longer do we breath, no longer do we live
Death amongst us, death upon us, we are dead
It is funny how I am the only one to know
To feel the presence of the Dark Lord
He is working and he is hunting
But what you don't, and won't know is...
You are the hunted
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Written April 22nd, 2006
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This is in the Bible----
What you say here is ALL in the Word of God, My Friend!
Be sober, be vigilant; because your adversary the devil, as a roaring lion, walketh about, seeking whom he may devour:
Whom resist stedfast in the faith, knowing that the same afflictions are accomplished in your brethren that are in the world. But the God of all grace, who hath called us unto his eternal glory by Christ Jesus, after that ye have suffered a while, make you perfect, stablish, strengthen, settle you. To him be glory and dominion for ever and ever. Amen.
From The Bible, 1st Peter, chapter 5 verses 8-11. -
This is great! Very dark and thought-provoking! I really like it! Keep up the great work Em
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Very profound and deep and true and that is why travelling around in the dark can be so dangerous, but this is a conscious decision and so one must accept the inevitable result. You have shown the dark so side so vividly so how about a sequel showing the bright side ?? and show your poetic talents to the full. I dare you ........ I know you have experienced both sides, but it finally is determined by who has you in control ...
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SUPER!
wow this is very intense!! wonderful job on this!!! such logic yet so dark!! i guess its the dark side of reasoning! i really liked the flow, and the subtle rhyming thats here and there....just tucked away. great job! awesome poem!!
~Sorrow~
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