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Studing My Own Prison

Not what I wanted to see
So I killed what I didn't want to be
Far from perfect
No longer will I infect
Change is good, they say
I look on the floor and there I lay
But who cares?
This life will I no longer share
I drag my body across the floor
I love the pain give me more
The blood is seeping
This pain I'm keeping
All I want is endless sleeping
My heartbeat is slowly leaping
Walking towards the asphalt
With my face on the ground
And all I wondered
Was how I could be this far down

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Written April 23rd, 2006

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  • countrygirl81704
    June 21, 2007

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    interesting

    i liked the intensity of it and the wording was good. I was kind of set back by the background. lol it is the exact opposite. lol it was kind of hard to understand at times but once reading it again it's easier to