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Suck On This Pies!!

I have no shame
Its only a game
But still I cry
And wonder why?

Collingwood suck
Especially old Buck
Essendon are better
Especially Fletcher

Black and white
That ain't right!
Black and red
That's what I said!!

So if you think the pies are it
Your obviously a dead shit
Cos the Bombers are the best
Screw Collingwood, screw the rest!!

Written by Forever-Damned and ---Selene---

Author notes

Ohh dear.. If you live in Australia and watch AFL, then you would know that Essendon got beaten by Collingwood by 7 points! And as you can also tell from this, I follow Essendon!! but I have NO SHAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was written by both me and ---Selene---!!!
Written April 25th, 2006

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  • April 28, 2006
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    great work! GO DONS!

  • lovealotbear
    April 28, 2006
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    Hey, great poem, well paced .. but a correction needs to be pointed out.. BULLDOGS ARE THE BEST!! Keep watching, you'll see

  • April 27, 2006
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    It will be in no way conveyed as mine... It will be known where it has come from... Thankyou very much... I appreciate it

  • April 27, 2006
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    Haha! Great write Em! Made me smile! Must admit, I can't stand AFL... NRL all the way..
    Love ya!
    Edited on Apr 27, 9:38 p.m. because ''.
  • nothing-important
    April 27, 2006
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    lol!! great write!! im sure my mum would disagree with you though!! lol nice work!!
  • Black Mamba
    April 27, 2006
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    HEH!!! lol amelia!!!! woot!! ESSENDON IS THE APPLE!!! YES!! LOL
    heh nice poem emma lol well done!!

  • Crazychook
    April 26, 2006
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    WOOT! GO ESSENDON!!! BOMBERS ALL DA WAY! (I get told all the time that they are shit) Come on my bus in the afternoon (The second bus) and most of us are Essendon fans! ME INCLUDED! I HAVE NO SHAME! LUV EM!!!!

    Luv Meelz

  • Stardust100
    April 25, 2006
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    lol brilliant great write sweetie

  • Dancing-Incessantly
    April 25, 2006
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    GO DEMONS!!!!

  • Chu
    April 25, 2006
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    I see, so that's what happened. Meh, nice write. But I do dissagree... carlton are the best.

  • unco
    April 25, 2006
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    This is a very opinionate poem... GO TEAM E!
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