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The Diamond Hook

My heart has dropped ten feet
As my body feels worthless defeat
From this height I will jump
My lifeless body they will pump
My friends think that I am alright
Yet, my soul lives in fright
From this life I will depart
For no longer have I a heart
As your eyes stare at me
I think what I will never be
I can never please you
No matter how much you put me through
Do you see all my tears?
From all those long years..
You hate the way I act
But that's just a fact
You hate the way I dress
You say it brings you stress
You cannot control me
You'll never see what I see

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Written April 26th, 2006

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  • xPoisonxDollx
    May 28, 2006
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    jesus christ, you are amaZing. how can you write like this??? absolute brilliance.
    ~amy