If words of love could heal
I would speak tender affection
If touch could remove pain and suffering
I would take your hand in mine and raise it to my heart
If the scent of a flower could remove all fear
I would fill your home with flowers
If nature's beauty could take your eyes away from your troubles
I would bring you to the majestic mountains
If the taste of wine would let you taste the goodness of God
I would pour the sweetest wine into your soul
I, as a mere man, am powerless
So I pray to the only one
Who is able to heal
To remove pain and suffering
Whose perfect love casts out all fear
Who when you set your eyes on him
Will cause the troubles on earth to fade to insignificance
Who gives us the sacrament of wine
To reminds us of his goodness and love
To know that our souls are already healed
Author notes
Problems are too big for me, so they are given to the only one able to handle them.
Written April 30th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- A Surprise Compilation For Blushfulmoon (Contest) by Red Red Rose.
500 points, ended May 6, 2006, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Xlnt flow on this write my friend, the words drew me right in from start to finish. I also liked your choice of wording, I made it not sound so cliche. Xlnt job...GETS


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Beautiful, thoughtful poem written for our mutual friend, Susan. Very nicely done!
Maureen
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I sure wish I could know this is true. beautiful, Melphleg- even those who don't want to believe in God, must be able to read behind it and see the beautiful compassion of the writer's own soul.
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excellent~
Oh this is beautiful....
Just loved it...all flowers are accepted
Thank you so much for this sweetie
It's beautiful and you are such a wonderful friend
Best of luck in the contest
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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