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I'll Still Be Missing You

I see you now
(I won't see you then)
And I haven't given up
on what might have been.

I won't forget your laugh
I won't forget your face
I won't forget those memories
I won't forget our place.

I'll still be missing you...
But when I see you walk.
I'll look and I'll smile
but I won't let my feet stop.

I know what we are:  
You and me are never.
[and I know we can't be]
It's now 'you without me' forever.

But I'll still be missing you.
and When I see you talking
I won't stop to look around,
I'll just keep on walking.

And I'll still be missing you
It won't go away,
This part of us...
I know it will stay.

My dear, I'll miss you
Reassure yourself that fact.
I won't see you again,
but I'll still want you back.

And I'll be missing you.

I already do.

Author notes

I want to turn this into a song...it really sounds like one.
Written April 30th, 2006

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  • Vox
    May 1, 2006
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    Thank you! Well, I hope you enjoy the rest of my poems as well! There are quite a few! (If you're THAT adventerous!)


  • tragedienne
    April 30, 2006
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    I can relate to the feelings you expressed in this poem. You put them into words really well. Very well chosen closing line - it sort of punches you in the stomach and puts things into place. Great job! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.