Worthless, useless
Throw me away
Thoughtless, hopeless
I'll die another day
All this time
I thought it was true
But this time
I see right through you
I'll use my fist
To show you my hate
Your life you'll miss
Apologies? Its to late
You walk right past me
Like you only did right
You can't see me
You won't win this fight
I gave myself to you
You took a part of me
What must I do?
Life I will flee
I want you to know
I'll never love you
You tore me so low
With your bullshit I'm through
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Written May 1st, 2006
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very powerful....i loved it!!! great write, keep working. you have real talent
~amy -
very nice. the rhyming is good, but i suggest that you don't use "Time" to rhyme with "Time" becuase its a little too much. but it is still very good. i can somewhat relate, except it wasn't about me and a lover. very good.
~Alya
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