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Puff, Puff, Pass...

puff, puff, pass . . .










.    .    .woah.    .    .









this feeling of bliss--
euphoria running through my
. . .blood

my glazed eyes glance at the sky
and I think . . .







   .     .     . man, I'm high

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Written May 2nd, 2006

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  • Takunaki
    January 8, 2007

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    Great piece. very unique and creative. simplistic yet straight to the point. captures so much in a few words. nice job.


  • i feel
    December 6, 2006

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    lol i have been there to!
    well you sound like a cool
    person! what is your asl?
    love angel


  • June 28, 2006
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    lol nice lunatick
  • Wishing for HIM
    June 1, 2006
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    kool. creative

    lol thats all i kan say-do-type.... ha ha ha. no...i'll add to this, i like this. its kool. never thot somethin could come outta bein high...well sumthin like wut you rote????? dunno what im sayin but creative.
  • Aly-Girl
    May 4, 2006
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    AWesome!

    Haha... i love it... Totally true... i couldnt tell you HOW many times i've thought and felt the same thing...it is BLISS!!
    Great job keepin' it real
    I need a dime of green N' a pack of Nicotine,
    Aly

  • brushfire
    May 3, 2006
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    So, you're a stoner? Never knew that.
    I must say, ick.
  • TLRufener
    May 2, 2006
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    Very simple, and straight to the point. I again must compare this to the two guys I live below because they are like this all the time.

  • JeannieD Hunter silver member
    May 2, 2006
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    Cute. Well done. Very creative.
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