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Words Part I

Words die,
Patients kills them.
In time they lose meaning,
In time they lose their lives.
Without meaning they lose their being
And such we cant remember why
Why it is so easy to forget what you say
And hear what you meant
We will never forget your existence,
But disregard you creation.
Your words are dead.

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Written May 4th, 2006

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  • WindLeaf
    August 12, 2006
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    "Why is it so easy to forget what you say and hear what you meant." I found this to be quite true. I praise your use of personification!
  • VentulusFamosus
    May 8, 2006
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    wow. that is so deep and so true. I love this part, "We will never forget your existence,
    But disregard you creation.
    Your words are dead."
    We always hear about all these important people and what they have done, but it's all dead to us now. Wonderful write!!!

  • clamchoder
    May 4, 2006
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    the truest words were never typed....words are dead they are only symbols and what a way to use them in this poem strong but simple....it's amazing what you can do with symbols to get across a message only few ppl understand....this was an amazing poem i throughly enjoyed...clammy.