I sit here in the same room as you,
And it’s killing me knowing you aren’t thinking about me,
It’s killing me knowing you’ll never love me,
It’s killing me…
You’re like the sun,
Shining bright across the land,
But your light never touches me,
Me, the lonely night.
We are the same,
Yet somehow so opposite.
Why can’t you love me,
And unite my dying heart with life.
Love is the life,
The life that keeps me alive,
So must I die now,
Alone, unloved, imperfect?
Perfect me with your love,
Save me with your love,
Save me…
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New crush turns to unrequitted love...
Written May 5th, 2006
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I agree with night owl, it was full of passion. A good write, too. Thanks for entering!
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awesome write
this is an amazing write, full of passion. I enjoyed reading this a lot! you have overwhelming talent. keep up the great work and keep on penning -
Indescribly amazing!
I adore this paul!! Amazing, deep incredible! This is the best poem i've ever read in this catagory! You've outdone yourself paul.
Write more I want to read your poetry i love them!
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