The first time I saw you
You were all alone looking sad
I walked right up to you and offered you a hug
You gladly accepted it
As time when on we got to know each other better
My heart began to love you and yours love mine
We were with each everyday
Then I found out the truth
I turned around and guess what I see?
You suckin face with another guy
How could you be so cruel?
You broke my heart and now it's time for me to break yours
Author notes
This poem is about a friend of mine. This happened to her last week.
Written May 9th, 2006
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This started out so sweet and I was thinking "awww.." then it took its turn. Interesting little poem, I too was a bit thrown off by the 'guy' thing and thought "oh! He was gay!" it actually works quite well that way, imo, but its fine as someone else's perspective too.
Thanks for penning this, it was nice to read. -
Hahaa, first time i read it I thought that you were saying that your boyfriend started making out with a guy.
Okay, well anyway, I really like this poem. I could really tell that you were hurt and that you wanted to get even(well, the narrator wanted to). Great write. -
i thort it wos a good poem
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reread it I edited it
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no It wasn't lezbos I putting it from the point of veiw of a guy
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i dont quite get it, are these two lesbians? cuzz i said no homosexuality in my contest lol.
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