Her silky cries
Against my touch
Her lovers eyes
Fulfilled lust
Her satin screams
Moan through me
Her heightened dreams
Our reality
Her soft embrace
Her lips I trace
Her love its place
With me
Always
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Written May 10th, 2006
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I really really love this one....Trminds me of something I would attempt to write or dream of
I am now inspired and off to write something tonight
Lynda
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This piece was sweet, simple, elegant and enchating! Well done Muddy! Veri beautifully written! Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck in my contest as well as any and all future poetic ventures!
Maggie -
who ever she is she is lucky
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Excellent muddy, this poem has every ingerdient of aperfect love poem, it has smooth flow, it is short and it is sweet.
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"Her silky cries
Against my touch
Her lovers eyes
Fulfilled lust"
Very prettiful, Scribe...& I think if you'd said "fulfilled Trust", it would have been even more accurate & wise, my Friend...Ya can't have that kind of Love & loving without it, as you well know, Richard...Yes, she is a lucky woman, indeed..but then, you're a lucky man, as well...Beautiful, Scribe...Good luck in the contest...
Wanderer
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Ahhh..this is heady stuff, my friend!
Lucky woman!
Simply beautiful.
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This is one of the most romantic poems I think I have read of yours. Good luck in the comp.
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