Drowning in these rough waters,
I cannot stay afloat any longer,
My limbs thrash to stay up
In vain, I take my last breath.
Murky blue water is my only sight,
Light cannot touch me here;
Air cannot touch me here;
Darkness without you.
You are my lifeboat,
Keeping me afloat on these,
These rough waters:
The Sea Unrequite.
I can feel here,
I know you are near,
Jump in and save me,
Take me to my lifeboat.
Your love is my lifeboat,
Keeping me afloat,
If only you would save me,
Save me from this life.
Author notes
i was supposed to be doing a spanish quiz...but this was more important
Written May 10th, 2006
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Wow!
This poem is astounding Spyke! I love this very beautiful in a sad way. You're really good at making sad love poems they speak to me in such a wonderfull way in how you are towards love and it shows the emotions I never really am able to see in you. Love it very much keep writing more. -
i like it.
i like it, i really do. im glad im not the only one that relys on love. it seems like all my poetry is about love, i guess i'll check out some more of your work. i agree, a lot of things are more important than spanish, it's a pain in the ass class.
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