alone in the rain
nothing is left but pain
loneliness never leaving my side
no where, looking for a nicer guy.
alone in the rain
tears roll down my cheeks
as you slowly fade away
my heart is tared in two
my thoughts of the memories of you and me
start to come out from the heart
and soon make me fall apart
alone in the rain
is where i am
nothing is seeming like it's right
nothing is new
but i know i'm in fright.
the face i see in the mirror
is a girl that is hurt
and i can't be here no more
nothing is left in me
just alone and descete
but i also know i feel like burning you inside a devils room
nothing i do now is nice
i want to smack you for everything you thought was kind
but to me now
nothing at all is just standing on a cliff
ready to fall
and ready for lighting to strike and make it less of me that's is in pain
and but now
i'm alone in the rain.
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Written May 12th, 2006
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wow, this is very moveing and very good. i like the ending becuase it very intresting and full of emotions. keep up the brilliant work
starlockx -
i amm sorry but i have to say that i am a cutter and i know how you feel some time . i hate people that say i know how you feel because they bo not know. but i do know. so thats why i am saying this
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Awwwww
I'm really sorry you feel this way! I know you are hurting now... but it'll get better... it might take some time, but you just need to trust me. Writing poetry, I think, is the best way to get out your feelings. As for this poem, I like how you kept coming back to the "alone in the rain" ... Nice use of repetition in that idea. Very heart-felt poem. If you ever need to talk, send me a message - even if you just need to rant to someone
--Tim
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