We all must sometimes have dreams
Though no sense is often made
Often sown into our seams
All dreams are fading jade
And nothing lives in between
Are we strengthened by a breath?
We all must be very keen
To evade the kiss of death
Then it comes with its despair
Making all things light and dark
We all see it as unfair
Knowing Dusk-Dawn made their mark
They now take time in their leave
Shall this be my final eve?
Author notes
A Shakespearian Sonnet written for English Class.
It was rejected. Oh, well, I wrote another one and I'll get that up ASAP.
Written May 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Pre-Write Extravaganza 3/ rhyme only by piccola.
600 points, ended October 12, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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English teacher=EVIL!!!
Edited on May 15, 8:56 because 'ten thumbs'. -
why is this rejected? hmmm... this work will not be rejected by you're brother.
Wonderful work... like sis recluse said, keep it up!
penz
(darn my head...) -
Don't know where to begin on this one sweet sis.
Terrific write throughout and another of my much liked finale.
Keep up the wonderful penmanship.
LOL
Linda
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