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SpeaKING (Words part 2)

Listen to him speak,
His words flow,
Like cold water down your spine,
Clever words that pierce your mind,
And make you think just like him,
He owns your heart,
He owns your time
You’ve fallen now that you’ve let him inside,
It hurts to be in this deep,
But now it seems that it hurts more to leave
Your own thoughts won’t help you now
His words own you.

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Written May 12th, 2006

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  • VentulusFamosus
    May 25, 2006
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    damn child, this is wicked cool. I loved this, "His words flow,
    Like cold water down your spine,
    Clever words that pierce your mind."
    awesome job u crazy Mexican!!!!!