He picks me up and throws me back down,
With out a Care in the world if i am OK
He never realises that the tight grip of his hands
Leaves bruises everywhere on my body
I keep my secrets well hidden from him
I never know what mood he'll be in
When he walk through the door to abuse my heart
Then he walk out the door like he walks out my life
He will never know............ never know
When he walked in my room and found me lying there
He screamed at me and expected me not to care
But i couldn't take this abuse anymore
I stood up and stood proud
In my heart i was not afraid but there was apart of me
Think that he will do it again...... but i wont let him
Are you confused i asked as he looked at me with
His horrible green eye
The reply was yes for why do you stand up to me
When you know that i am way stronger and could knock you down
SO EASILY
I turn and said that you may be stronger but i am wiser and
My will is much stronger than your
I walk out the door and left him there
And know he was the one on the floor
I remember the night that i left him SO well
I remember the great feeling i felt
I was free as a soul should be
But still to this day he tries to walk into my life
And still to day he calls me his wife
But the truth is i never was his and the truth is
I am NEVER to be anyone apart from my own.
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Written May 14th, 2006
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Deep write!
You have my vote for number one on this one! YOu are a very talented poet. Thisi s one of my very favorite writes. I love how you stood up to him, and how you ended this WRITE! " am NEVER to be anyone apart from my own"
I love the imagery here. I could just see you almost spitting in his face, and he deserved it! You took control and stood up and laughed him off. Great fantastic and VERY INSPIRATIONAL!! We could all learn something from the message you give here!!!!! fabulous!
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Hay sweety i hope this isn't true. Well i guess it's not lol anyway great poem sweet, talk to you later, love you. x x x x x
xx Shadow xx -
First, thank you for your comment on "A Perfect Child".
As for this poem...wow. I kinda get the feeling it is written partly from experience and your own emotions and feelings toward someone, and yet possibly someone else's story mixed in with it? I don't know why I get that feeling and it could be totally wrong, but that's how it seemed. I think it's great that the person in the poem realizes she is her own person and no one has the right to abuse her. Great job on this!
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wow awsome. i really honestly felt the emotion in this piece so amazing. great write and i hope to read more soon. Awsome!!!
XX Tear XX -
Well done
Lots of emotion in this poem... Well written. A poem to be proud off.
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