My heart breaks
Ever since thee departed
These diluted visions of utopia
Have left me broken hearted
In the deepest darkest of the night
I lie down and dream of thee by my side
Until I wake up and see the light
And I realize the soul within me has died
How cruel reality can be
Bringing me down
And making me see
That thou shan’t ever come back to me
The birds sing their melody
And I cry my harmony
My dreams will not let me be
Thoughts of thy face will not leave
Author notes
Wrote it for an assignment. Not much like Poe... Oh well...
Written May 14th, 2006
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Heeeyyy, I'm a grammar freak too!
"Ever since thee departed"
It should be "thou".
Is that shadowedkimmy soccerkimmy?
The ending is too abrupt for my taste, and the last line seems forced. -
Haha, I'm a grammar freak too! ^.^
I'm not that into love poems... so yeah... This one has a somewhat popular theme. -
don't you though?
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Thank you. ^.^ I love grammar freaks. =]
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first stanza, last line, HAVE.
other than that fairly nice.
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