MZBLONDEMOMENTS(Acrostic){Gold} by mzblondemoments at All poetry

Masquerading behind this fabricated smile
Zealously pursuing an existence worthwhile
Believing in dreams that may never come true
Loathing this existence pasted together with glue
Obsessed over images ruminating in my mind
Not accepting these thoughts are all intertwined
Denying outwardly, my private self-destructions
Emotionally tarnished by perplexing seductions
Mindlessly in search of uncomplicated realism
Obscurely dressed in a orb of surrealism
My anonymous persona now is severely charred
Exposing my soul as if on a laminated card
Now those inner realms will ultimately collide
Trying to conceal those confusions, I hide
So no one knows mzblondemoments inside

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Option 1

Written May 17th, 2006

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A contest entry

~*Anything GOES*~ by ItsalltheSame68. 313 points, ended June 26, 2006, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Fairy Nutty Buddy
December 9, 2006
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I LOVE YOU!
This is an incredible poem, hon, just incredible, and awesome picture. I do understand the inner turmoil and demons and effort to hide it all away not only from others but from ourselves.

Awesome job and congrats on the gold.

Love you!

Kimberly G.
Lionslove
December 3, 2006

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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!
...SWEETIE!!!!!....I WENT RIGHT AWAY TO YOUR PAGE (AND IT'S OVERDUE, SO FORGIVE ME...TO REMIND MYSELF WHAT WAS YOUR "FORTE".....THIS IS DEFINITELY ONE OF THEM!!! - I DON'T THINK I'VE EVER, EVER, EVER READ AN ACROSTIC SO UN-FORCED, BRILLIANTLY WORDED...WITH SUCH DEPTH AND EASE OF FLUIDITY!!!!!

JUST BRILLIANT!!!!!!

much love, my talented, beautiful friend!!!! (i want to know mzblondemoments....i'm sure the real her is just as beautiful as what you've shown me so far....but i know what you mean...we are a contradiction, in many realms, unto ourselves...and sometimes it's a crumbly castle, huh?....oh well...all i know is that you do, no matter how discouraged you might feel about yourself at times, have a wonderful, beautiful heart.....and ....i wish i could hug you!!! )
- mzblondemoments
  December 3, 2006
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  Thank you so much sweetness. I wish I could hug too. You are a sweet wonderful person and I love you for that.
  ~luv ya
  ~carol
Recluse Writer
August 20, 2006
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OOOOOOH YEAH..No doubt in my mind why you took the gold.
Great Write Sweetie
Now wishing I had signed on as 'ME'

Linda
mzblondemoments
August 20, 2006
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Thank you elsantirey
elsantirey
August 20, 2006
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Neat
Neat
mzblondemoments
June 27, 2006
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Thanks Dawn for the congrats and the read it is much appreciated.
eyesofanangel524
June 27, 2006
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Very nicely done acroustic. Well written, great form rhyme and meter. Congrats....well done. Dawn
mzblondemoments
June 26, 2006
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Thank you so much Mercury Rising, for your congratulations and comments and applaud. It is much appreciated.

~much love~
carol
Stu Pididiot
June 26, 2006
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exceptional
What a wonderfully honest and fearless self-portrait and expose that was extremely well-crafted. Congratulations on winning the gold trophy, you surely deserved it.

All the best,
Mercury Rising
mzblondemoments
June 21, 2006
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Thanks so much you lovely comments are very much appreciated. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
ItsalltheSame68
June 21, 2006
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Beautiful I enjoyed this greatly good luck in my contest you are a tough competiter now you scored 95/105 i loved this poem good luck

~Gianna~
mzblondemoments
May 24, 2006
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Believing your so sweet
Embarking on this feat
Kudos, respect you won
Commenting on each one
Amazing reviews stun

I know that wasn't a very good acrostic I just did of your name. I did it on the fly, but any ways thanks so much for your indepth review. Your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. I am truly happy you liked it.

Edited on May 24, 9:21 p.m. because ''.
Cappucine C
May 24, 2006
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A+
Magical job on this poem, I'm as wild as a
Zoo reading this poem's awesome rhythm and rhyme.
Beautiful job on both of those, I don't often read
Lovely poems like this (esp. acrostics) with such
Outstanding rhyme AND rhythm.
N-e-ways, all of these lines and verses are simply
Delicious! Well, maybe not tasty-wise, it's
Ever been a wonder of mine if words taste good. I
Mean that you wrote a lovely piece, both
Overall and in the two-line-rhymes. A very
Monumental job here, it's
Ever-pleasing to read lovely poems.
Now, I said all the lines are awesome, but I love the last 2:
"Trying to conceal those confusions, I hide
So no one knows mzblondemoments inside"

Kudos, and good luck!

Bekca.
honey bear
May 20, 2006
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very good
a wonderfull write but i see you are in competition with ME good luck and keep up the good work
mzblondemoments
May 19, 2006
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Thanks so much for the read and the comments I am so glad you liked it.
davidjmartin
May 19, 2006
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This is a great poem. The acrostic seems so natural, the rhyme and flow are excellent, the vocabulary is magnificent... truly, a wonderful entry and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
mzblondemoments
May 18, 2006
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Thanks, I am trying now to write some on darker side
heartofpainfultears
May 18, 2006
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this is very good i love it great job
mzblondemoments
May 18, 2006
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Thanks Fire , I am happy you enjoyed it.
comeflyaway
May 17, 2006
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This was an awesome array of words. They were encirling my mind compelling me to comment on your work of art. So who is mzblondemoments?...We may never know. Such a great job you did on this. I could read it again and again. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Keep up the good work.
mzblondemoments
May 17, 2006
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Thanks Terri. I always wanted to do an acrostic of my name.
Terri Norris
May 17, 2006
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BRAVO....This is really quite good!!
Good job, VERY good job!
Always,
Ter.
mzblondemoments
May 17, 2006
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this piece.
-Ink Artist-
May 17, 2006
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FABULOUS
This is simply FABULOUS!! Amazing how well you can do acrostics and come up with a beautiful and creative verse to fill each line!! You have HUGE TALENT!! I LOVED THIS!!

~*Lori*~