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Pain Unknown

What is it that gets me
about the tears on your cheek?

Your silence
is worse
than death

What is it I did
to cause you so much pain?

Your lies
hurt me
most

What is it I can do
to help you through this pain

To take it
and make it
a smile?

What can I say
to make you speak

Tell me
all
that hurts

Let me make it better....

Author notes

I dunno... From my gut I guess.
Written May 18th, 2006

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  • 0darkAngel0
    June 15, 2006
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    lucky girl
    for having a man who wants to make things better.
    interesting

  • evilbatwoman
    May 19, 2006
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    This is kinda sweet. I'll be honest that I tried to get this to flow in my mind and the short stanza in the middle felt like a trombone and a french horn in a blender. (told you i read some of it.) Other than that, I thought it was lovely. keep writing.
    4EVER BEIN ME,
    WESLEANN