In her darkest days, darkest hours of despair
She walks around reminiscing, remembering
The time they shared together not long ago
The things she looked forward to as a mother
Holding her baby so tight, rocking her to sleep
Pink bedroom, pink clothes, pink everything
Just the thought of never being alone
But now she feels as if she is alone, but shes not
She has me, she has her friends, her family
And I hope she knows she can talk to me
Any time, any day, whenever, wherever, 24/7
She needs to talk about it, to let it all out
She needs to know that someday she will..
She will get this opportunity at motherhood again
And next time it will work out perfectly
And she needn't worry, only happy thoughts and hope
Author notes
Incase you are wondering, this is about my friend Ash who just had a premature labour and her baby died.. I didn't know what to say to her when she told me. All I could say was how sorry I am. I knew how much she was looking forward to meeting her little babe.
Ash.. I may not know you very well. But I know you must be hurting terribly. You know I am here for you whenever you need to talk! I have told you that so many times! I hope you don't get angry at me writing this. If you are, just tell me and I will get it off straight away! 
please just try and stay strong.
Written May 19th, 2006
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Wow. You wrote this over two years ago, and even though we've long been out of contact, I'm still touched
Thank you again for taking the time to write this. <33 I still think about her often, and I'll always miss her. Things do and did get better though. 
I hope life is treating you well xoxo
[This is Ash btw, I was Shattered Existence before I left a while back.]
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You nearly had be in tears with this Em. Seriously - this is one of the best pieces I have read in a long time and it shows that AllPoetry has some really talented people here and its not full of try-hard poets!!
You relayed your sincere thoughts and feelings through out this poem perfectly and One can tell it has come straight from the core of the heart.
I wish Ash all the best for the hard times and the new.
- Zoe
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oh I feel sorry for this person it must be hard this is a nice poem though nice work!
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em! very nice of you to write this poem. its good. well done xoxo
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This is a sad emotional poem my dear sister. I'm sorry for your friend.
Love you,
Shahrzad
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Oh Em! I am in tears! Thankyou so so much for your beautiful, touching poem... Thankyou for everything! I know that people care and just want to help me through this... And I appreciate that more than I can say... I'll get through this somehow... It may take a while, but I will! Thankyou so so much for caring... Love you!
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where is this girl named ash from...because i have a friend named Ashley we call her Ash...and she was preggy.
~emo whore nicole~
this is a great poem
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