Take my hand, my heart, my love-
Into the light, of our life.
Come walk with me
On the path of smiles and tenderness-
Where joy is filled by all.
Come walk with me
Our steps shared, with caring-
Alike the bounty of a precious bloom.
Come walk with me
Our love springs forth, anew-
Its essence fills our breath.
Come walk with me
Forever our steps, together-
In hand and heart- as One.
Come walk with me
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Written May 21st, 2006
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wow that was sooo beautiful and sweet I loved the first stanza that was so perfect this whole piece flowed nicely you could feel the love I loved this good luck and thank you for entering
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thank you for entering this piece. i liked how you ended each with the saying, "come walk with me." that was so cool. again, thank you entering and i wish you the best of luck.
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wow beautiful and magnificant. I loved how it flowed with a healthy dollup of love and adoration. Good personalization.
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I have a similar poem, mine is about like mindedness.. deep in my archives somewhere. This is lovely my friend Muddy.
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As much as I love seeing a visit from you. I miss ya girl, hope all is well way down south
hugs and peace Muddy -
"Take my hand, my heart, my love-
Into the light, of our life.
Come walk with me
On the path of smiles and tenderness-
Where joy is filled by all.
Come walk with me"
Good thing you're already married, Richard...you'd have a few "takers" after they read this lovely penning, my ohhh, so romantic Friend...
'Tis beautiful, Scribe...Good luck in the contest, Muddy...
Wanderer
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Beautiful and tender Muddy. I love it when you write this way. Good luck in the contest.
~Lyrical
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Aww...this is so sweet and believeable. Someone out there say this to me, k? Lol. Beautiful job! Good luck in the contest!! *A
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