you look at your self
see somthing you dont like
take a razor and cut
your self twice
you look againand
nothing has changed
you cut your self
again and again
you skip school
you never go home
you hate your family
you feel all alone
you feel the blood
drip down your hand
you see your self
in the mirror again
but when you look
you see your soul
beautiful as ever
pure and whole
you drop the razor
and look again
you see the heart
of a child
from within
you look at your arm
with messed up skin
you think to your self
I NEED TO BEGIN AGAIN
Author notes
Written May 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Partying, Drugs, Sex, Cutting, Lies, and Alcohol by lies-n-pain.
500 points, ended May 23, 2006, 22 entries
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not too bad, i like it. i can't understand why you'd get good-n-EVIL to collaborate with it. she's a retard. i really don't like her that much. (i know, i know. i'm backstabbing, but so what. She's trying to ruin my realtionship) well, ttyl.
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wonderully written! thanks for entering such a powerful poem! thanks for entering! good luck. remember to re-read the rules and enter the information needed in your author comment box. if it's not fixed tomorrow, you will be DQ'ed
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