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About to Snap

Every time, I start to shine,
Bad luck puts, me in a bind.
The more I try, the harder I fall,
Falling and falling, missing the call.
I hear no voices, I see no hope,
The world just thinks, that I'm on dope.
But no drug, could ever be like this,
How can I, be so amiss.

My sanity, is almost gone,
Anger and hatred, have come upon,
My soul and turned me, into a wreck,
I see the world, as a little speck.
A tiny speck, under my feet,
They think they can kill me, but I can't be beat.
I'm about to snap, not much left to hold me,
Death will soon empower my heart, wait and see.

I'm broken, I'm lost, out of touch with reality,
Filled with destruction, overwhelmed with cruelty.
I'm not the person, I once was,
I've lost my mind, all because,
I'm tired of it all, I just don't care,
This fucking world better beware,
I'm unpredictable, I'm ready to blow,
If only, if only, you all could know.

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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Alicias88life
    October 25, 2007
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    I really like this!

    this is a really good poem i love the way you did this this is a perfect example of the way people feel when life gives you somthin good then yanks it away again. l8r man oh and hey gime a call 808 638-3523 thats at home ill give ya my cell l8er after i get it fixed hey checkout some of my poems i think you'll like them
  • Muddy Wormwood
    August 11, 2006
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    Welcome to the club man, I know how you feel... DON'T DO IT!

    "Every man would be a coward, if they were only brave enough."

    Love,
    Mud
  • meaningfull
    May 24, 2006
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    Man this is an emotional write. I have felt this way so many times! Thankyou for putting it into these beautiful words!