you rock away
my moon pain skin cry
& we are
sing spray rain
cool morning
wet grass
wild hair
bare feet
storm shake
summer smell
warm bed
water & blood &
love spin dust.
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I'm in love. This time, it feels good.
[magnetic poetry.]
Written May 26th, 2006
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beautiful and gorgeous and cute!
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WOW!!!!
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HELLO KERRY! Wow, I haven't heard from you in ages and ages. How was Africa, et cetera? Thanks for the comment...ahh. I am clearly not checking AP regularly enough; I only just got your comment (but maybe you'll forgive me when I say that Kyle is down visiting me?).
I hope you're doing wonderfully. Best wishes!
Ruth -
This is great, rupert. I enjoyed it lots. It definitely has a musical quality, so I think your title is perfect.
Kerry
P.S. Bet you weren't expecting to hear from me
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This reminds me of spring and hot summer nights and freedom.
Magnetic poetry is awesome.
I'm glad you're happy.
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I love magnetic poetry – I have three different sets on my fridge at home, and often find myself taking 20 minutes to make a cup of tea just so I can play with the lovely words…this is gorgeous: simple, brief and sweet. I think magnetic poetry can be very good sometimes for eliminating the comfort-zone of words you’d normally choose and giving only a limited base of words to select from – it gives a sort of freshness of expression, even though the words aren’t particularly zany or different…do you know what I mean? Oh, how I ramble…anyway, this is great. Especially loved the naked simplicity of ‘bare feet’. Good job!
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you are adorable. and i KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT with the moon pain. ha! and i can see snapshots of these things. and i like when you post things so i can read them.
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