I swear that my world spins around me
twisting---everyday just twisting
Begging to give me more punishment
"If she dare speaks,
Slap her across the Cheek;
Give her a nasty new look
And bruise the skin til raw"
"If she dare to hate;
Force a gun to her head
Make her eliminate it"
I am entitled
to normal human emotions
like hate, misery,
happiness and envy
my world has changed
it has twisted
Twisted so hard---
Its broken in two
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Written May 26th, 2006
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B-E-A-UTIFUL ALEX! This was so awesome. I understand how you feel, your right of being yourself causing your punishment.
Keep on writing, my dear.
Luv ya~Mish -
"If she dare to hate;
Force a gun to her head
Make her eliminate it"
I am entitled
to normal human emotions".
My favourite part, it just appeals to me but I cant explain why.
This is a truly amazing write. It screams so much angst and emotion about how the world seems to work in our minds.
I wish I had more to say but my mind is drowning in "wow"'s.
Brilliant piece, you're a very intelligent writer and this poem had me hooked from the start.
Keep writing.
Take care and be safe.
Lauz. xXx.
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