An Angel, she claimed to be,
"Drink!" she said, on an alcoholic high,
"Smoke!" she said, on a nicotine high,
Still, on the ground I was, firm on my feet.
Barely clothed was she, I noticed, on a high I was again,
Her skin, those eyes, those lips....
Feet? Ground? Hell with it all,
"I'm in heaven!"
Author notes
Nothing like the seductive power of the fairer sex...
I've experienced all kinds of highs.. but nothing like that of admiring the beauty of a woman, especially the eyes..
Heavenly!
Written May 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- All that glitters may not be gold! by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended May 27, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha... of course, no one can!
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Kimberly! Who can resist the beauty??
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Cute poem! Just can't resist the beauty, huh?
Kimberly G.
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Faeorie! Oh yeah... Absolute respect and reverence I have for the female body..And my girlfriend??? Maybe you should read my poems "If Only" and "Hate you my Love" .... Thanks a ton for the comment!
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I like how you have so much respect and reverence for the female body. If you have a girlfriend, she's really lucky. I really liked this write, keep it up!
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Lavendar Butterfly
oops! I didn't realize I had exceeded the word limit.. Was lost in penning the poem... Sorry! Whoa.. I do seem to havin loads of bad luck with your contests! Well let's see how I fare in the next one.. thanks for the inspiration again! You're the best!
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An excellent piece, so creative and well penned. Unfortunately the contest called for 20 words or less. This was a wonderful write though... x LB
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Thanks Sue! Loved the comment! You're the best!
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hahah! brilliant my boi!... now i know what you meant by 'inspiration'...! you have done exactly what the contest asks for, 'to be amazed with few words' and u sure have done just that!... i liked the frank and laid back attitude of this poem!... great job!
best of luck!
Sue!
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