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I forgot to say

This day was the best
Even better than the rest
I made you laugh and smile
And it lasted a while
We hugged and kiss
Thats the thing i miss
The time was near the end
Being happy she would pretend
I leave her and went
Just one think i forget
one thing
so simple
I LOVE YOU

to Ashliegh we are together at last  i lovw you dearly

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Written May 29th, 2006

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  • StrvnArtstLstResrt
    June 6, 2006
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    Beautiful write

    This is such a sweet poem.Well written and great flow.Such a loving moment and i truly understand the feeling of forgeting just three simple words,three word that can truly change your life.Well done!!Bravo!
    StrvnArtst