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You see here sitting on a her own
You know how bad it is to be alone
You walk to her she look right at you
She looks more beautiful than u ever knew
You sit down by her and start to chat
Seconds minutes hours you sat
Staring at her for a while
She gives you one of those smiles
You lean towards and close your eyes
You kiss and let out a big sigh
You get up together and walk away
The two of you forever you stay

"If you see someone talk to them something always comes good of it"
"A world is a better place with friends"

Author notes

If you notice most of my new poems have captions now
Written May 29th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 29, 2006
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    Bravo young man. Good for you. I enjoy reading these over the others. But I know what it's like to have to spill feelings and emotions. Keep on writing. It helps.

    Storm