Shelter, you might have granted,
Yet, heed must I the spider,
'Trust not the human's love,
He loves not his kind.. '
Author notes
"Man cannot truly love his kind, then can he love the birds, animals, flowers and trees?" warns the spider, whose net is everywhere between heaven and hell.
Written May 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Inspire me in 20 words............ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended May 29, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Heyyyyyyyyyy how'd u do that bird thingy? Teah me teach me! And the angel thingy too.. God...you know too much! And thanks for the comment!
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Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo, great job on your short poems! I sing your praises!
- Kimberly G.
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awesome write...! now that i closely look at the punctuations i see who really speaks these words...
Love the message you have conveyed and how you have conyeved it too... very much to the point with the perfect touch of poetic brilliance...!
Needless to say, this is an awesome write...!
Best of luck!
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You understood what I exactly wanted to say.. I was actually having a hard time keeping the words under 20 as per the contest rules and yet try to convey the meaning... And I jus can't tell you in words how much it means to me that you exactly understood the meaning... You are too awesome! And like I've said before.. too mature for your age.. Thats great really.. Good luck to u!
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So little words but such a powerful message that is so true... If we can't love each other how could we love the miracles around us.Such a nicely written poem...I wish you Good luck in the contest..
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A wonderful message penned so beautifully into a lovely piece of poetry. Thank you for this entry... x LB
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