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take a chance on me

“ Take a Chance On Me”
I been thinking of the time to make us be
If you change your mind,
Honey I’m still free
I’m the first in line
Please can you just take a chance on me.

If you need me,
just let me know,
I’m going to be around
if you feel like you’re all alone
when the birds have flown
Honey I’m still free
please can you just take a chance on me.

If you put me to the test
I’m going to do my very best
and if you like me
I would promises you I won’t hurt you or lie
But I wish you could just give me try.

We can go dancing,
we can go walking,
just as long as we’re together
We can listen to some music,
maybe just talk and I can get to know you better
Cause you know I love what you got
Something that we both do,
but when I I’m alone I dream about that I’m with you
It’s like magic
If you want me to leave it there,
But I just got to say I’m kind of
afraid if you are my love that you will always care
But I think you should know
That I will never ever going to let you go.

So baby cant you see, all I want you to do is:
Just take a chance on me.
Come on, give me a break will you
You can take your time baby,
I’m not in a hurry,
I know I’m going to get you
You I don’t want to hurt you, baby don’t worry, I never was going too
Let me tell you now why?

My love is strong enough to last
When things are rough
It’s like my heart beating fast
Your like magic
But I cant get you off my mind
I’m not letting go
Cause baby
I want to love you so

If you think you got me to see
Then there’s a little thing you got to do for us to be
Please just take a chance on me.

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Written May 30th, 2006

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  • Argon1442
    July 21, 2006
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    this was a really interesting poem that you wrote. i really liked it a lot though. one thing that i thought worked really well was that you used lines more than once and it made it seem kinda like a song, or a story. i also liked the subject and how you wrote it making it sound different in a way. one line that i liked was "Come on, give me a break will you" mostly because it was like that the person in the poem was begging the person to take them and give them a chance because they deserved it. but anyways i really liked it.