Torn homes, burnt fields,
Undying hunger, devilish thirst,
Yet invincible is this bond,
Of blood.
Takes more than a World War.
Author notes
To all those families that held on though the thick and thin of all those pointless world wars.
Written May 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- Be inspired ~ 20 words or less... 20 entries only! by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended May 31, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
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Go Ricky! Go Ricky! Good job!
- Kimberly G.
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Genovefa! Hey thanks a ton for your comment... You must have a great perception to see so much in these few lines... but that is the power of poetry isn't it? Thanks again!
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It's so small,yet it evokes deep emotions!Wars are always cruel and you describe very well what they leave behind..A poem that indicates talent!
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Lavender Buttefly! Thanks for everything.. The Inspiration.. The Appreciation ( In words and in points
) Thanks again!
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Very clever and amazing how you have seen this within one picture. So creative and well expressed. thank you for this entry... x LB
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Twistasista... True.. And even helpless must've been the plight of children without mothers to care for... Thanks for the comment..
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so many women were left on their own to raise the hcidlren and care for the land...it had to be a very hard life.
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