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Once More



                The  sun  forces  shadow  to  shape
               Long dark  reaches  of  limbs  over grass
               A  day  goes  down  to  rest  and  a song
                begins,  high  praises  from  a  pond.
               Remembrances  lock  the  day  inside.
               A  key  of  learning,  a  key  of  release
                those  indeed  will  open  this  door.
               As  one  more  waste  of  time,
               one  more  slithering  hour  goes  by.
               This  procrastinator  rest  well
               while  the  do  all  plans  ahead.
                Tomorrow  beckons  us  in  our  dreams.
               Maybe  tomorrow  the  procrastinator  will
                rush  and  the  doer  will  rest.
                The  gold  grows  dark  until  dawn.              

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Written May 31st, 2006

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  • eagles claw
    June 2, 2006
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    i think sometimes you can't help being a procrastinater you don't really know if things will change if you wait until the last minute on a thing you will know it will be the decision you make and won't change.

    another great poem from you.