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forgive me

broken through the window of someone's home
hearing the sound of glass breaking
i'm scared to be alone
hearing a voice call my name
while the trees blow in the wind
tiny footsteps coming down the hall
i'm suspicious by that person
so i creep up and saw
no one there
and something falls down but it wasn't no body at all.
i walk through my house
looking in every room
hearing creepy noises
the house got quiet and went dark
theres a light outside
i went outside
and saw the light and i'm standing there alone
and there was a dark shadow at the other side of the street
i looked scared if it was a stranger
i just stand there looking and see the stranger walking towards me
soon it came close to the light
now i can see it
but it came up to me
wrap there arms around me
i was shocked
then when i turned around
i started to noticed
it was somebody that i once knew
he was smiling so big to see me
he said i'm sorry for causing all this bunny
he kissed me on my lips
and i smiled and hugged him and
i said it's ok
i forgive you

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Written June 3rd, 2006

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  • Blasphemous Girl
    June 11, 2006
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    This is really well written, I enjoyed reading it. Well done with this. xXx.

  • Daegal
    June 10, 2006
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    Sweet I love the way it's intense at the beginning, juxtaposed to the "happy" ending. I suppose it's not so much happy as relieving Good uses of tension in there, well crafted.