I sway silently
under your silkspun touch,
a wildflower dancing
in the wild wind's embrace.
You whisper Wisdom to me gently,
infinite Time
twirling on your fingertips
as you subtly smile
at the blush you inspire to bloom.
You sing to me softly
of sorrow & sweetness
unlimited by desire ~
my Heart echoes
in my throat ~
my eyes ~
my words.
You sculpt my Soul
with your inevitable Beauty,
smoothing away the roughened edges
with your tenderness
& Truth.
I follow your Path,
which is my own,
enchanted by the magic you weave,
knowing Life & Love shimmer
on this distant horizon...
~ June 3, 2006
7:20 p.m.
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Background courtesy of Danna Hobart
Written June 3rd, 2006
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Thank you for your gracious words, Black Feathers...I'm pleased you enjoyed it so much...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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this is an astonishing, exotic piece of work...i admire the standard and the work put into this...great job!
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Thank you for your kind words, Juzolin...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...I like the things it reminded you of...I'm quite sure your grandfather is happy to know you're finding your poetic voice...& you weren't babbling...but feel free to do so if you're inclined...
Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, poet on skis...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Excellent
I loved this poem. It made me think of he cover of my favorite book, a sheet of clean white paper, lotion...it was just really good. It also made me think of my grandfather, who lives far away. I rarely see him. He is wise, I think. He is also a writer...I won't waste space with useless babbling Good job!
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this is a beautifully crafted pice of work. You have such a great way with words and while i am not a fan of alliteration you used it to your advantage. i like how you use nature and with an undertone of romance and love. great job.
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Thank you, Gordie...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, wordsmistress21...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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excellent
Brilliant poem from the soul words of passion and honesty.Well expressed. Thank you for sharing such a talented poem. -
Thank you for your kind words, Simply Bohemian (is there such a thing??? I thought it rather complicated, myself) 
I'm pleased you enjoyed it so much... Ummm...my phone number??? Wellll, I am a woman...one that loves men...one at a time, that is... Thanks for an interestin' comment, Poet... 
Wanda
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the great thing about your poem is that it is so verstile...the emotions that you describe can apply to many different situations. i love the descriptions that you put in poem. very nice.
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Silky smooth is the deliverance of this I even found my self breathless as I read this.
Such wonderful, imagery and the canvas you painted with your words where perfect.
May I have your phone number! (j/j) lololol
Bravo
Edited on Jun 03, 7:54 p.m. because 'mis-spelled'.
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