I have sighed a thousand times
& wept a thousand seas
in order to bring you my Love,
untarnished & unafraid.
I have swayed with torrid tempests
that threatened to rip me from my anchor,
but I have stayed afloat,
just to look into the depths of your eyes.
I have tilled the barren soil,
scattering seeds as I went,
just to give you this garden
in my arms.
I have scaled a thousand mountains
& walked through a thousand valleys,
just to find the Soul
that whispers my name
without sorrow.
I will do what I can ~
I will do what I must ~
in order to gently take your hand
& place it on my rapid heartbeat,
so you will know Truth
in all its finery.
I will wrap my silken wings around you
& we will fly
over this beautiful horizon,
unbound by Time
& bound for Glory...
~June 4, 2006
3:40 p.m.
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Written June 4th, 2006
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Bridge over Troubled water
unbound by Time ..the Soul
that whispers my name
without sorrow.
through sorrow's whim
tomorrow's swim
sheds sadness' skin
to rebegin
untarnished & unafraid.


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Your words, Love, your words...Thank you so much for them, my poet.
Love,
Mark -
Thank you for reading & for your always kind comments, jbfisthebest...I'm pleased you enjoyed my work so much...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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another beautiful poem, by a mighty talented poet,
great write, words are touching, makes one feel the love.
your have become one of my favorite poet.
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Thank you for your gracious words...The honor is mine...
Wanda
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Fantastic
You've done it once again, you've taken my breath away. What an amazing expression of love. You truly have a gift. Thanks for entering, I am honored, and good luck in the contest. -
Thank you for reading & for your time, La Luna Rosa. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your comment. My style changes periodically; I've recently gone through some subtle changes yet again...I've been writing since I was 14; I'm 47 now...I love poetry & the Poets that create such magnificent art...Be well, Poet.
Wanda
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Ah. I'm only beginning to be acquianted with your style, but you never fail to disappoint.
'so you will know Truth
in all its finery.'
Incredible.
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Queen of love poems??? Nahhh, Di...maybe the duchess...
Thank you for your kind words, my Friend...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Thank you for your kind words, DesertRose1...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Thank you for your kind words, gullionmar...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Thank you for your kind words, PolkaDottedPoppy...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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You honor me often & well with your words, my sista...
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Wanda
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Thank you, my lil' one...I'm glad you enjoyed it, Lexie...Be well, Poet...
Mum
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Thank you for your kind words, Toots...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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Uhhh huhhh...I love Buddy Holly, too...
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Hi Sigh, no one can write this kind of poetry better than you,yesI would crown you the queen of love poems ,super write my friend but you do not need me to tell you, I shall look forward very much to see what you will write in my comp, great loved it, you have my applause, hugs Di
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Wow, I honestly loved this poem! I like the unique style and beautiful words that flow throughout the whole poem. I really like these lines:
I have sighed a thousand times
& wept a thousand seas
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I have scaled a thousand mountains
& walked through a thousand valleys,
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very well written great imagery keep up the lovely writing
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excellant work
This poem is creative and unique with a solumn soft detailed twist beautiful words and creative ideas. Your adjectives and nouns make this poem really pop. -
to bring love untarnished and unafraid, one must open up their soul and allow it to vibrate against others. You knwo this and practice it with every poem. It is like getting past the rind and feasting ont he sweet meat. How beautifully done.
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love it
Mum this is really good.. I love your work! I really do!
Love ya!
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This is a really beautiful poem, Night Hope - I think it can be taken on several levels of interpretation, too. For me, that is a hallmark of excellent poetry. Best wishes in the contest. Toots
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So beautiful...it is,
and your effort
to show the subject
your passion's fury
flys to touch still
other universal lines
waiting to be gather
in the endless journey
toward true love's way...
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