Wild hearts whisper pleas to the moon, reveal this worlds destiny,
his prediction returns in haunting repose, drifting down to.....
..........silence.........
Author notes
Written June 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- Magic sentence.... by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
Lovely work my friend. I can see that your literary magic has not faded. It is good to see you active again.
I really liked the profound progression captured in one sentence. Wild (whispering) revealing and the gentle fading to silence. This is brilliant.
Best of luck in the contest my friend. -
excellent~
Oh beautiful words you have penned here sis....
Love the imagery as well...also very thought provoking too
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs n love
Susan~~~
-
A very beautiful and powerful sentence. thank you for this entry... x LB
Adding your comment:
2 old applause
