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A Surrealist Adventure

A  highway  winds  out  like  a  noodle
       The  sauce  being  the  mirage  heat.
         Driving,  immobile  passenger  just  lying  
        low,  as  the  machine  sips  the  miles
       like  a  super  shake  in  the  cup  of  
       this  damnable  green  world.
        Fill it  up  with  golden  souls.
       Let  the  spirit  carry  us  far  and  wide.
        It's  all  for  eating  man,
          Sleep  well,  but  not  long.
        You  might  miss  the  filling  in  your  cookie.
        The  peelings  are  good  too.
        The  clover  is  sweet,  but  the  green
         that  stuff  keeps  you  going.
         So  get  on  out  there  and
           EAT  LIFE!  
         Before  it  eats  you.

Author notes

LIVE  BABIES LIVE!!!
Written June 6th, 2006

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  • rampantheart
    June 6, 2006
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    Hahahha...very whimsical piece of liteary genious youve created, it reminds me of an abstract piece I made on my site a while back called the Melting Pot...applause for sheer originality!