Strolling barefoot within a dream
blushed with tiny wisps of
breathless,
anticipation
her heart hears not a sound,
but the sweet rhythm of her lover's sighs,
whispering
remember .... remember me
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Written June 7th, 2006
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excellent
This is very beautifully written. I like the tender mood you have created with your words.
etherealforu
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very sensitive and sweet... hi Razzberry, you remind me, I have to take a Milka candy bar picture for you
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This is very pretty, and really does say alot with the few words, it carries emotion also and is filled with love! You have a beautiful way with words. I like it!!
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excellent~
Beautiful inspired words sis
Love it..thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest...
Hugs
Susan~~~
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This is really good. It created a clear image in my mind. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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