Waiting for your love,
you've been away so long
waiting for someone,
waiting for your love.
Waiting for your love,
you've been away so long,
waiting for someone,
feeling nothing,
your gone.
Waiting for your love,
waiting,
to be undone
where have you gone?
With this love,
thats gone,
what cold heart is this?
waiting to be undone.
Author notes
well this is my friends version of my poem Waiting so I give all my props to Capricornpoet.
Written June 7th, 2006
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This is magical. one spelling mistake that I noticed: feeling nothing,
your gone.
should be...'feeling nothing YOU'RE gone' but other than that it is great! well done
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