You questioned our relationship
And treated me with disrespect
But I still loved you
You try to look so innocent
But I know you are guilty
Yet you feel no guilt
You live in my memories
The good times and the bad
But I still try to forget you
You took away my happiness
You stole my heart and soul
And never gave them back
You have moved on twice
I have moved on too
But I can never forget you
You look upon me with pity
I look upon you with hate
You are my murderer.
Author notes
This is simply about Jesse yet again. I AM over him. He just pisses me off! I really don't even like him as a friend cos of what he did to me. I know that's probably nothing compared to other people, but I can't help it. He is, and will always be a complete bastard.
Written June 9th, 2006
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You did a good job with this. I could feel your feelings towards this dastardly man. They can rip your soul out sometimes can't they? I'm glad you are moving on. Keep up the good writing. RobinRae.
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great write
This poem is great! i can definitely feel the emotion when i read it. I love poems like that. keep up the great writin! -
great write yeah people suck if only we didnt fall for people like that
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This is brilliant Em! I love it! You have expressed so much, and there are parts I can relate to... Well done on an awesome poem... Keep pushing through
Hope you are well...
Love Ash
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Jesse is a total ass in my oppinion. Lol I can't stand him one bit anymore and i bet even if you two didn't go out... he was still be the ass he is today
You are a kick ass person Em and kick ass people and wipes dont pair up - because ass wipes belong in the bin and kick ass people belong on a throne all hail emma!
So glad you could come to the basketball match last night... it was legandary!
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well written keep up the good writing
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Well said I think the way you wrote this was excellent and I enjoyed reading it muchly. We all know he's an ass coz of what he did to you, and I doubt many will forget or forgive him for that- so that's his mistake.
Well done!
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I agree with Aletia!!!
Stay a good girl though...because what would we do without you?!!!
Keep smiling!!!
Meelz xoxo -
nice write babe, it doesnt even matter if youre not over him its all good, take time to be weak, let go of the strong u for a while and chill, i did it and now im heaps better, anyway
keep writing love stacey -
i can't say to you that i know how you feel, because i don't, but i can say this..... YAY!! go you!! woohoo! kill the bastard!! good poem btw lol
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